Saturday, 2 March 2013

A Political Detail

Please read and leave a comment about the creative piece I wrote for my English coursework:


A Political Detail
… Day 1, my parents keep telling us to stay together, we have no idea where we are.  We’ve travelled for what seemed like years.  My little sister, Bernice keeps crying, and Mutter and Papa are trying their best to keep her calm. We are in a small room, with one toilette between us.  We are Jews…
The diary entries were hidden in between small cracks in the wall of the cell. 
Day 1,825. My name was Eric Silvermann, now I am prisoner 55768, one of the many children placed in hell on earth; darkness had descended upon me, nothing but the light from this candle fills the soiled cell that is my home…
More and more pieces of the diary entry were being pulled from the wall: mixtures of parchment, cloth, toilet paper, pages from books with small etched messages in ink and pencil were opening our eyes to the horrors of this political hell.
17, a number that no one actually cares about; It has become meaningless to me...  Thomas Jenkins has just crawled past me; I have tried to kill him once before, but now his rat features and his small tail are a blessing.  Small bread crumbs from supper attract my small friend; nothing made me happier than the conversation he and I will now have…
As I wander about the room I find more and more pieces of paper revealing more of the boy’s story to me.
…Day 740, the guards took me away from my sister, my mama and my Papa, I am weak.  My arms are thin.  The posts on the bed that I have been given are thicker.    They were taken towards the tall towers in the distance, probably for some extensive work.  They said they needed me here so I could continue building…
The room was no bigger than six by six feet.  How had this boy lived for so long in this small prison cell?
Day 1,867: my nails are blackened and the cut on my leg has started to itch.  The guards have refused to help me yet again, and there is no medicine or doctor to tend to scars.  My life is considered meaningless; I am just a boy… 
Each document that is found in this room has been hidden in cracks, door hinges and as mattress fillings.  The cell is a room of secrets and it is brutally honest with each note it releases.
Day 1,870: I stole a piece of cheese from the officer’s mess; if I am caught I will surely lose my life.  hunger drives me to extreme lengths, I haven’t eaten in days and I need to keep my strength if I am to survive…
It was becoming increasingly clearer to us that the people trapped here had suffered but from reading these pages of this one boy’s life it was becoming clear to me the full extent of human suffering in such a time as this.
…I have been counting the days since I arrived.  I still have my dressing gown which is of great comfort to me as none of the other prisoners have been allowed to keep their original clothes.  I still remember the night I was taken.   It is a cold evening in mid-December; the snow has left a crisp even white along the camp which we have been forced to live in…
The rest of this page was charred from some sort of fire damage that had gone on in the back corner of the room it crumbled in my hand and left no evidence of ever being written.
…The camp was an echo of our history that was to follow.  I can now say that at least I will be remembered as one of the many
Part of the wall had crumbled away on one side, a distinctive feature of time; revealing more messages for those who would take the time to read.  Eric Silvermann is just one prisoner in this camp, but why was he confined to solitude?
In one of the small cracks I find another note.
…Day 1,950, my strength is almost none existent.  I can hardly get out of bed to do the work, and I can only move one rock whilst working, the guards have started bets to see how much longer I will survive.  My life is almost over, and I have not seen my parents or sister since…
The page had water stains on it and was torn on each side the bad looked different from the others, the writing was shakier than previously and it seemed to wither away at the end of his sentences.  Eric had lost a lot of weight by this time had been bed bound and was ready for...
…day 1,951, I am to be transported to the towers… Death no longer scares me, the fear has overcome me. I have seen my own friends turn on their families in order to survive. I have seen people I once knew before this horror; destroy their own village for this war.  What I have learnt is human life is meaningless in a war, we are just humans, we are just a political detail.  Friendships are destroyed.  Families are killed. Voices are lost…
Prisoner 55768 – died June 17th 1945
                                Age 17 years 6 months
                                Gender: Male
                                Name: Eric Johan Silvermann
                                Religion: Jewish
                                Method of death: Gassed
Eric Silvermann is one of the brave.  He is a political detail, in a war that was cruel.  The Nazi party collected him and millions of other Jews in an ‘attempt to purge the world’, even if they were directed by a mad man.  He and many other Jews were forced into trains, possessions taken off them and rights stripped from them.  In 1933 Hitler finally achieved the majority vote and started the extermination of European Jews.  Eric Silvermann is just one of six million. 

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